BOTI MATTERS TO ME
Boti falls which serves as a place for tourist attraction has a high altitude and thin air as you begin to ascend the top of the hills where as the spring water that flows at the top could be used to quench ones thirst. With the cool breeze and the rustling of leaves to cool of the body from sweat during the walking trail and the umbrella rock which provides shade for relaxation makes it an ideal place to visit. Therefore my place matters because all over the world
tourism is known to have been a promoter of major foreign exchange earner
for a lot of nations. Although Ghana does not place much emphasis to gain
maximum benefit to the nation from this industry the site has great scenery and
a great atmosphere which each and everyone should experience and this is why boti matters to you and me.
I like how passionate and urgent your writing is. It really captures the concept that you were writing to preserve a place, for fear that it may be destroyed. The pictures definitely added a nice touch as well. It is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAdding a more personal touch--like a description or story--could have improved the blog. Overall, however, I really liked your writing. It was very persuasive.
Though I can't necessarily relate to you, I respect the fact that this blog is about an international venue. Reading a switch up from typical responses is always a joy. There were a few punctuation errors here or there, but other than that, great job.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the heart and soul you put in this writing. I havent been but am really considering now in my lifetime to have to visit(convinced me in 100 words). Well done!
ReplyDeleteYour use of wording and imagery makes me want to go visit this place. The scene that you set, as well as the beautiful pictures helps sell this place. It also makes the reader feel how much this place really means to you, its sentimental value.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described your experience of Boti falls. Your writing make me want to go to visit Boti.
ReplyDeleteI like the imagery of your Boti Falls, but why you write it all with Italic font?
ReplyDeleteThis will be on my list of places to visit, it sounds relaxing. I like that you showed us that why it is important it is to Ghana and its people.
ReplyDeleteI wished you talked more about why it matter to you personally.
Your pictures are great! But i wish it was more personal.
ReplyDeleteGreat pictures, well written, but needs citations. Also where are your citations???
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